I guess this would belong here...

[Dave]

I finally learned how to play the main part... note that during the beginning I was at the tail end of a conversation with a friend. :P

I took the "chorus" part and made it somewhat of an intro, then I play through the main part a few times, with an abrupt ending after I saw it was going long. :P

It's kinda sloppy, and the quality is shitty...but please, give me your input! :D

[Dincrest]

I think you should play and rerecord it again clean, without the distortion.  The distortion kills it for me.  It just doesn't sound right, like using death metal crunch on an R&B ballad.  

The FF prelude is light, airy, and subtle and as such, I think a clean guitar tone (perhaps with a chorus effect during the octaves) would sound much much better.  

The distortion gives it too much beef in the midrange and makes it sound kinda muddy.  For a song like this, you want to scoop out the mids and allow the shimmery, glassy highs to breathe.

[Dave]

Thanks for the input! I was actually debating recording it sans distortion when I did this.

I'll have to do another! heh...