I spotted a few more errors myself, your instead of you're (or was it vice versa?), and "could care less" rather than "couldn't care less" TWICE, once from Estelle and once from a random NPC. I could buy it from Estelle, she seems like the kind of character who'd make that sort of mistake, but not so much the NPC as much. Still, more often than not it's a very strong localization, and we're damn lucky to get it at all (though I do wish it hit earlier in the PSP's lifespan, just so we could be waiting on Zero instead of the second game).