Smile (New) is compelling. There were a few parts where the prose got a little funky, but for the most part it's a very smooth read. The end was suspenseful, too, which can be difficult to do with just the written word.
My only suggestion is to get to Ryan's story about Sandra faster. Perhaps, make him only get tackled by police twice before that (and say this was a common occurance), so the last time is the third time the reader knows of - things seem stronger when they come in threes.
I certainly enjoyed it though. :)
(My computer messed both times I tried to open Here and Now New.)
So what happened with the mags and journals?